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Wonderful eyes that you can stare into for hours and seem to be lost in the universe is how he describes me
And as hard as i try and stare into the mirror i can't see the universe that he says he can see
Its so wrong how i look at him and want him when i can't have him cause he belongs to someone else
And he loves her and he cherishes her and she cares for him and all i can think about is how i want him for myself
But i had him so close and he wanted me too, our hearts beating as one as we moved and pulled each other closer still
That emptiness in my heart seemed to go away for the brief time we were together until it seemed to reach its fill
But you were some one else, not yourself, literally possessed, and though you wanted me, you still loved her
So now i sit and cut away the hurt, waiting to be taken to a better place, knowing i can only have you...never

by TeeNAgESuicidE
posted on 06/26/2008

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Comment by ashuhhland: Jun 26, 2008 8:40 pm
omg this is so good. i know exactly what youre saying in this. wow. keep it up...and im here for you if you ever need to talk
Comment by oceanreverie: Jun 26, 2008 9:11 pm
i agree ith ashuhhland, this is really really good. i understand what you are going through, i've been there myself. great work, and keep it up. and as for a title, what i personally do is i go through the poem after i write it and look for a word or small phrase that really jumps out at me.
Comment by Maryellen: Jun 30, 2008 6:31 am
The poem is good, but the feeling is not. You can't be a bad person when you love like that, but, to love someone you can't have does not mean you have to go away, if you really love him you want him happy even if is not with you, I know it hurts but it will get bearable, until you find someone who feels the same about you; just think how beautiful that will be. Please don't hurt yourself.
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