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?hmmm

Your LOVE caught me by suprise
A hott rebelious hint in your eyes
Your bad ass boys
With your bad ass toys
One look is all it took
U and your misterious look
That was before
Now i think your a man whore
U go off at night
Always have to start a fight
Never will i look your way
You'd be better off gay
You claim ur love 4 me is a million suns
But your always off with your other "HUNS"
U made me cry
But now ive found a better guy


by 13131emogurl131313
posted on 12/31/1969

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Comment by tearsofrain: Jan 6, 2007 8:44 pm
!! great! its amazing that u can tell so a complex detailed sotry in so few lines. very great!!
Comment by scorpio: Jan 7, 2007 6:44 am
great ending. Powerful and strong ending n i love it. Intresting how u responded to how that jerk acted. Greta poem!
Comment by ragingquiet13: Jan 7, 2007 12:35 pm
i love this one and sounds like someone i know
Comment by danielradfreak: Jan 7, 2007 4:45 pm
i agree with tearsofrain that was a very good poem.LUV IT^_^
Comment by LuciferHasFallen: Feb 7, 2007 9:54 am
good for you if you've found someone else! no one deserves the kind of guy you described
Comment by 13131emogurl131313: Feb 10, 2007 12:16 pm
well truthfully im single...again lol
Comment by gothic666angel6: Feb 10, 2007 1:58 pm
reminds me of my ex alot... wish i could find someone better too...
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