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...to mourn.

You swore to me you’d never leave,
that together we’d reach eternity.
But now I see you lied to me,
and we were never meant to be.

I can’t stop these tears that frame my face,
I feel as if I’m stuck in place,
and all I want is another taste
of you in my arms.

I just wanted you to love me and
you said that you would,
that you could, that you’d never stop.
Then you held my heart and let it drop.

Sitting here at the top of the hill
I look down below me and
feel my heart still.

It’s your birthday today
and I swore I’d stay away,
but I couldn’t think of a better way
to say goodbye to you.

The words are muffled by the rain
but I can hear him softly say,
“Dearly beloved, we gather here today…
To mourn.”

by PrettyOdd
posted on 08/22/2008

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Comment by shesXaXdisaster: Aug 22, 2008 4:26 pm
"i cant stop these tears that fram my face" very beautiful very very very nice work. keep it up.
Comment by asdfyz: Aug 22, 2008 7:23 pm
that is so powerful. IT is also very mysterious. You want to think that guy died, but description makes you want to think that he jsut left you. IT is so strange but good. I like this one alot.
It is very different from your normal style. I'm sorry about whatever happened though. Stay strong. That person if still looking out for oyu from up there.
Comment by gerbera24: Aug 23, 2008 2:31 am
i agree, this is very powerful and intense. this feeling can be written so many ways but you truly converted it down on paper. i really enjoyed this piece. =]
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