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...Remember My Words...

Another day,
Another line.
You choose him,
time after time.

I'll write yet another,
poem about why I'm sad.
I'm so sick of it all,
I miss feeling glad.

I'm tired of writing,
these poems that never put me at ease.
If someone knows the way out of this heartache,
Don't hesistate to tell me, please.

People say "You'll be okay",
And smile right at you.
And your thinking," Yeah right,
you don't know what I'm going through".

Do you know what it's like to feel,
like you'll never feel happy?
Or what it's like to feel like you have to scratch your eyes out,
Just so you couldn't see?.

Even as I write these words,
my breath is filled with sighs.
Because they remind me of you,
so I slowly begin to cry.

It's not fair,
this feeling that's left me bare.
It's not fair that I'm still missing you,
and you don't even care.

You made that obvious,
when you let my world turn dark.
I stare lifelessy at everyone,
On my heart, you left a mark.

My poem is done,
my feelings have been told.
I hope you remember my words,
Til' the day you are grey and old...

by PrayForMe
posted on 12/27/2007

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Comments: 67
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Comment by JennaJo: Jun 25, 2008 8:44 pm
Obviously a lot of people can relate to this, as do I. But, just a point for possible future improvement with your writing, it did seem like in a couple places the rhyming was forced. But how the poem can pull you into what you're saying, it does take attention off of that.
Comment by megapat: Dec 27, 2007 4:55 pm
I love this,
I feel the same way about my ex.
Vote up!
Comment by HowCouldYou: Dec 27, 2007 5:05 pm
Wow...Im no where near as good as you..Great poem
Comment by kitten546: Dec 27, 2007 6:26 pm
its the most amazing poem ever i feel that way right now too great job!!
Comment by SadGirl96: Dec 27, 2007 7:59 pm
I like this, great job
vote upp
Comment by jeckgadz: Dec 28, 2007 1:27 am
ahh, it's like this...
you're missing someone else, right?
i think you better put your attention on something else..
for example,

Playing Piano

Learning Guitar

Playing Violin

or

just Study....

ahmm suddenly.. you'll feel you're over him/her... you'll feel that...
Comment by jeckgadz: Dec 28, 2007 1:28 am
SWEAR... and better put your cellphone away first.. haha!
Comment by thebrokenhearted: Dec 28, 2007 3:14 am
This explains it perfectly!!!! maybe ur not "ok" or "alright" now but you will be!!! therez another girl out there thats perfect for uu!!!! VOTE UPPPP!!!!
Comment by oOSilentSoulOo: Dec 28, 2007 4:53 am
well... great job... I cried while reading... well done! really...
And I was going through this long time ago... believe me.. it will be over sooner as you can say fuck you guys... oO *hugs*
Comment by missingmom: Dec 28, 2007 9:29 am
We have all felt this way at one time and for alot of us, even more times than we can count. It would be nice to think that our words would leave some permanent mark on their hearts and minds, but you can't make any kind of an impression on someone who doesn't care about you any more.
Good poem though, I know for me any way, just getting my feelings out on paper helps me to feel better and more able to move on. Hope you have a happier new year. Smiley
Comment by Waterblaze3234: Dec 28, 2007 2:22 pm
oh wow your an amazing poet! but i feel so bad for your hurt! i know what its like i've been there time and time again just wishing the old saying would come true 9"time heals all wounds") but it jsut never seems to coem quick enough! anyway beautiful poem Smiley
Comment by iskwesis: Dec 29, 2007 11:02 am
Great poem. I know exactly how you feel..I've been going through the same thing for awhile now. I've got a few poems of my own that say the same thing. Writing helps me alot too. I'll try to get them posted to share with you and others that have felt this way. Keep your chin up and be strong.
Comment by PrayForMe: Dec 29, 2007 2:43 pm
Thank you guys. Smiley
Comment by FlawsAndAll: Dec 29, 2007 8:32 pm
Wow your poem is definitely something I can relate to. I've felt this way before but I was able to move on. Just like you can. It might be dark right now but TRUST ME there's a light nearby. Go find it! Don't sit there in misery. As the saying goes misery loves company. So leave misery alone. VOTE UP. I really like your poem.
Comment by vampireheart: Dec 30, 2007 10:52 am
omg i love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Open smile
Comment by R3DandBLACKstars: Dec 30, 2007 4:15 pm
wow.
this is really an amazing poem.

if you ever need to talk message me.
Comment by JennaJo: Dec 30, 2007 10:03 pm
I was skeptical about how good it was going to be at the beginning, but as I read, it brought up emotion that got stronger and stronger as I reached the end. That's one of the most important things about a poem. Good job, and I hope everything turns out alright for you.
Comment by loveme77: Dec 31, 2007 9:04 am
;) It really pulls emotion through the words. At first, you have no idea on how it's going to turn out, but at the end, you're left breathless. Very well done, you have no idea on how one poem can impact a person. </3
Comment by shadowofasoul: Dec 31, 2007 10:21 am
excellent-voted upp-i know exactly how you feel- if you wanna talk please feel free to message me
Comment by cowboylover: Jan 2, 2008 10:59 am
i love it. don't worry life goes on
Comment by MorbidG: Jan 2, 2008 12:53 pm
I like this poem. Very nice. I feel this way often.
Comment by ibivan: Jan 3, 2008 3:46 am
hmm very deeep
Comment by Tequilla: Jan 3, 2008 8:06 am
I love it. Very Good. Vote Up!
Comment by jasonfoolio: Jan 3, 2008 11:54 am
hmm i like it.
very nice.
Comment by wwwdotcom: Jan 3, 2008 1:47 pm
wow *tear*
Comment by Poison: Jan 4, 2008 10:52 am
I know how you feel...I really do...
Comment by bryttboo: Jan 4, 2008 3:42 pm
very nice i know exactly what you are going through i know you probably get sick of hearing this but this poems relates to me a lot.
Comment by andypandy114: Jan 4, 2008 8:45 pm
wow, lol not that you care a bout what others say if its either good or bad because we're stranger commenting on your poem but it was good. i liked it a lot.
Comment by HisImperfection: Jan 4, 2008 11:38 pm
IT"S AMAZING!
Comment by SingingHeart: Jan 5, 2008 9:33 pm
You are so awesome, it touched me deep and i love it.
Comment by aqua4ever: Jan 5, 2008 10:10 pm
This is one of the best break up poems i have ever read i meant broken heart. I can realate alot.. thankyou.
Comment by misskenzie: Jan 5, 2008 11:38 pm
wow this is such a good poem.
I love it
I can really relate to it
Comment by bleedingheart: Jan 6, 2008 1:23 pm
wow idk what to say
very deep <tear>
Comment by AngelicallyBroken: Jan 6, 2008 1:42 pm
wow..I really love this it is sooo deep!Definitly voted up awesome poem!
Comment by sweetxdreamsXOXO: Jan 7, 2008 12:58 am
Wow is right. The first stanza caught my attention though. It was like I was about to run a red light then realized what was going on. That's so powerful. I wish I was this good. I almost wished I go to this first Sticking tongue out Anyway, amazing job. I think every person that left a comment should have voted you up because this piece is just breath-taking. I love it. Very moving, powerful, astonishing. Just pure talent. Keep writing.
Comment by BrokenHeartedGurl: Jan 7, 2008 11:40 am
Me and my boyfriend broke up on Friday after being together for a month and a couple weeks... My heart is completly broken and this poem describes everything.
Comment by UpAgainstTheWall: Jan 7, 2008 10:43 pm
Aww, and wow.
amazing, emotional, i loved it. keep it up
you have amazing talent.
Comment by urabaka: Jan 8, 2008 8:21 am
Very strong Smiley keep writing ^_^
Comment by cuca: Jan 8, 2008 3:41 pm
so true! you are a great writer! i see it in the rest of your poems
Comment by HeartlessAngel: Jan 10, 2008 10:11 am
amazing poem.
Comment by sorrowfulsoul: Jan 10, 2008 5:59 pm
This was AMAZING!! I know exactly how you feel. I think it was one of the best ones I have EVER heard! This is the first poem I've read since I became a member, and I can already tell that you are in the Top Ten "Best Poet" list.
Comment by tiffany: Jan 10, 2008 6:09 pm
DAMN that is a lot of comments well any how i seriously know how you feel. if you need anything i am here for you
Comment by invisiblegirl8512: Jan 10, 2008 7:44 pm
i love this poem it does seem like you pour your heart out in it .. and that makes it even better
Comment by pleasetakecareofmyheart: Jan 11, 2008 5:52 am
i really can relate to it Sad face i have a bf and he doesnt care for me....
Comment by moonlight: Jan 11, 2008 8:38 pm
awsome poem
Comment by GiveMeU: Jan 14, 2008 9:22 am
Amazing poem! Open smile
Comment by beautifulxhjfxdisaster: Jan 17, 2008 7:10 am
wow thats really good =]]
your a very good writer =D
Comment by tobeloved: Jan 21, 2008 4:20 pm
oh my gosh that's such a great poem! you're a great writer!! i know what you mean tho

keep up the great workSmiley

voting up

Comment by EmoPoetry: Jan 22, 2008 8:04 am
That poem was beautiful
Comment by littleemomonkey: Jan 23, 2008 1:38 pm
i lov ur poem and i feel the same way
Comment by Seleni: Jan 25, 2008 10:31 pm
I love the poem and most people can relate to it. but sometimes rhyme gets tiredsome, ry to write more freely and dont think poems have to rhyme to be poems. but if you life rhyme is ok, altough im not a fan of it. i just dont like it cause it gives me a sense of monotony which i hate, my life has enough of that to include it in my poems. Still great job and keep it up, you are good and you can become better
Comment by andypandy114: Feb 2, 2008 4:37 pm
wow, my puter froze to comment lmao
i really like it = ]
i'll tell you how to feel happy , SMILE AND THINK OF GOOD TIMES;
that makes me smile .. sometimes, i think .. lol .

and by the way, ignore the critisism up top, you dont need it .
Comment by Nickole: Jun 12, 2008 9:25 am
i love this poem it touched me
Comment by bluepetals: Feb 16, 2008 11:56 pm
this is such a beautiful poem, i can understand what your saying, but usually with heartbreak, not matter how many things you try, hobbies to fil up time, sport or poetry, it doesn't fill up the gap a lot. Everyone hates it when they hear this, but it takes time, usually until a sense of relisation or something is thrown your way. like right now you mgiht think there no reason to live, or everything is seeming so lifeless but after this passes, trust me, there is so mcuh more to life. But i think this is an amazing poemSmiley
Comment by babyboogt82886: Feb 19, 2008 9:48 am
great great great! i feel the same way about my ex. it definitely sucks!
Comment by danielle: Mar 7, 2008 1:12 am
its good
beautiful and well written
Comment by SmotherMe: Mar 8, 2008 12:30 pm
Very touching and well written, keep up the good work
Comment by TMacias: Mar 12, 2008 10:15 am
This is a great poem on relaying your feelings. Sometimes letting out our feelings only makes us madder, but once we have let off the steam, we begin to realize its their loss and the pain begin to ease. There will be a person to come replace the one you lost, it will be better than you ever thought. Head up, and when u least expect it... Poof there memory is finally gone.
Comment by deathmonkey: Mar 16, 2008 11:11 am
Well this definitely sends out a message
Comment by RoSe: Mar 23, 2008 11:13 am
such a sad, wonderful, full of emotion poem... u got my vote Open smile
Comment by inLOVEwithHOTTNESSmtm: Mar 23, 2008 9:42 pm
god that was soo deep, soo good
Comment by iloveyoubabyxo: Mar 25, 2008 11:02 am
wow, deep.

hmm, i know wut u feel like when people say that it'll be okay. and eventually it will be okay, but maybe now what you need, is to just talk to the person, instead of writing annonomously.

it helps to talk.

but ur poem
is amazing
no joke.
Comment by fallenangel6636: Apr 10, 2008 7:54 am
holy crap, i love this poem and everyone else obviously does too. amazing poem.
Comment by ThatUnforgetableCharm: May 8, 2008 6:55 pm
Que pides a Dios que El te va a ayudar.

Amen.

GreatPoem.
Comment by lindseymarie: May 13, 2008 10:48 am
this poem is amazing. I love how you made it rhyme, that always seems like a harder thing for me to do. Great job
Comment by friendZdogZ: Jun 14, 2008 2:00 pm
oooh. wow cool poem. : loved it
Comment by MechanicalMonster: Jul 3, 2008 10:17 am
You brought tears to my eyes. You really got real feelings down on paper. Thank you.

Vote up. =]
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