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15 Questions

Why is it so hard to fall in love?
Why must there always be something in the way?
How hard is it for you to notice me
Staring at you all day?

If you are not the one for me, then,
Why do you make my heart beat fast?
One look at your smile at any given time,
And time will seem slow to pass.

When can I know how you feel about me?
How do I ask that without scaring you?
Do not tell me after all I have done,
You do not feel the same way too.

Do you believe in coincidence?
Or do you believe in fate?
How else can we meet again in a pinnacle place,
All grown up and on a particular date?

If this feeling is one-sided on me, then,
What is it about you that pulls me in?
What is that special quality you have
That makes me wanna commit sin?

If you do not have any feelings for me,
What is the reason behind it?
Is the feelings of the other guy
So important that you have to mind it?

If you truly have some feelings for me,
And know the way I feel about you,
What is it that is stopping you from
Giving us a chance through?

All I ask is to be given one shot,
We'll know how it should be as time goes by,
I think I'm made for you, and you for me,
If you disagree..... Well then, why?

by SaintJ
posted on 10/27/2008

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Comment by WarStories: Oct 28, 2008 1:12 am
I feel the same way about a girl, what hits me hard is "that makes me wanna sin".. there is just something about her that I can't get out of my head... If you find a cure first, let me know...
Comment by XangelicXshadowsX: Oct 28, 2008 5:33 am
this poem is true to a tee...very well written...i agree, if you find a cure, let me know...^-^...
ps: hang in there
Comment by christi823: Oct 28, 2008 7:22 am
very heart-felt.
i feel that way about this one guy...

i read this and it sent a painful heartache through me.

very well done; great poem. [:
Comment by oceanreverie: Oct 28, 2008 11:17 am
reading this took me back to the time that i helplessly waited for this one really special boy in my life to notice me. we eventually became friends, but he never noticed how i felt, the way i gazed at him a little bit longer then i probably should have, the way i would trace hearts on his wrist nonchalantly with my finger when we were talking; he never caught on. i have him in my life now, but for all of those years..it was tortured heartache. this is wonderfully written and so easy to relate to. keep up the wonderful work.
Comment by forgottenchild: Oct 28, 2008 11:24 am
niiiiiice.
Comment by copenboy: Oct 28, 2008 1:00 pm
im really feelin for you man bout the only cure i could give is cowboy up and tell her
worst she can do is say no
what ever you do good will huntin and thanks for the tip
Comment by findmeinvisible: Oct 28, 2008 2:12 pm
i really like the beginging. but the way u asked the questions was great
Comment by SSSS1010: Oct 29, 2008 11:54 am
GREAT POEM
Comment by Freewriter91: Oct 29, 2008 9:28 am
wow this is simply amazing...
Comment by SPAGACKULA: Oct 29, 2008 10:40 am
A+ Super Dynomite!
Comment by becca8: Oct 29, 2008 12:42 pm
show her this poem, if she doesn't feel the same it will show her how you feel.
Comment by SaintJ: Nov 4, 2008 8:18 am
Thanks everyone for the comments on this poem.. Well... I hope you all like good news coz... I asked her the 16th question which is THE QUESTION... And well... She's mine now... Much obliged for the support you all gave and well... Hopefully I'll still have my poetic moods...
Comment by megsj: Dec 14, 2008 8:47 am
good
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