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12 - Epilogue


So many things I want to say
So many things I need to do
Every night now I pray
And every day now, I see you

I see the children as they play
I watch them smile and know it's true
Pick up my life and day by day
I carry on, along with you

by Kris
posted on 05/14/2007

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Comment by PoemWritingGuy: May 14, 2007 5:03 am
That's such a sweet and hopeful way to end your Otherside collection. I really loved and enjoyed reading them. I hope one day you write another one in a similar style.

I loved how it was mostly dark and ugly and then all of a sudden at the end, there's hope for the rest of this man's life. I guess, I can somewhat relate to this whole story (I didn't get as close to insanity or whatever) and reading this leaves one with lots of hope.

Anyway, I'm kinda rambling on but such a long thing deserves such praise. Keep on writing and I'll keep on reading. Bye for now.

P.S. Fix the title - '12' not '13'! That's my only criticism, LOL!!
Comment by kayla: May 14, 2007 6:08 am
What poemwritingguy said, Awesome jobOpen smile
Comment by Kris: May 14, 2007 11:18 am
Oops! Done!

And thanks for the great praise - it's really appreciated Smiley
Comment by footprints: May 27, 2007 1:59 am
And for the finale... a shimmer of hope. Life must and will go on. Thoroughly enjoyed all of these. Well done.
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