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gelid's Poetry

War - short sweet and to the point
Rainy Days and Paper Hearts - its really weird. but i need any and all opinions on this. please :D and thank you
This Might Be Just What I Need - burn me at the stake
Inamorata - Well...writers block. PLEASE GIVE ME SUGGESTIONS
It's not me, It's not you, It's just the idea of us two - i know you must be getting annoyed of how many poems i have like this trust me i am too. but idk, i just got in a rut of writing about this. PLEASE still tell me what you think about it thank you.(fyi not a true story at all)
I Hate That.... - Please read and comment. Losley based off a personal experience, very lossley. and I really really want some opinions on it. Warning, its very repetitive. accept for the last stanza. hope that doesn't bug you to much, if it does, well i did w
Suffocation - i seriously feel like i suffocation right now, im so pathetic, but hopeful. i wont be who i was before, and i want to make that a solem promise to myself. i wont let this same old feeling get the better of me, not again
The Worms Crawl In The Worms Crawl Out - please read and comment. the first verse is part of an old song, but the rest is my writing. and i want your opinions anyones.
what was never there - i think the stanzas seem somewhat out of order. but ive been stressed latley. lack of concentration....please just tell me ur opinions
All Eyes 2 the Stage - i think i might expand on the idea, but first im giving the short poem a trial run. please tell me if you like this.

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