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subject: "Plastic Emotions" posted: Mar 02, 07 12:37 am Reply with quote
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[i:2464b63fcc]wrapped so tightly arond my face
unable to move, unable to breathe
no one left to save me
no one left to care
tightning, cutting off my airways
is this not what i wanted?
but no, such an ugly death to die this way
trapped, insides sucked out
then left and forgotton like a dusty insect carcus
trapped in plastic
sufficating my emotions
until there all dead to me
one day you will leave me this way
a day like today
for you are dead to me
forever wrapped in a fake, meaningless smile
how did I become?
this one of none
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subject: Re: "Plastic Emotions" posted: Jun 04, 07 5:12 pm Reply with quote
oml, you are a fantabulous writer! more! more! more!!!


this is describing exactly how i feel right now

KUDOS!
 
  
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