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Amaya
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subject: Sunrise posted: Apr 20, 05 3:42 pm Reply with quote
This is my first Cinquain poem!!!

[color=orange:37e0e4ccbc][b:37e0e4ccbc]Sunrise
Bands of bright light
Sun shining till sunset
Makes me warm throughout a long day
Summer[/b:37e0e4ccbc][/color:37e0e4ccbc]
 
Gary
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subject: posted: Apr 20, 05 3:46 pm Reply with quote
Interesting. I would say this is good for a first time poem.
 
hayhay2
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subject: posted: Jun 04, 07 2:54 pm Reply with quote
niceee.
 
  
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