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bloodyxvxsunday
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subject: You, Unwritten. posted: Jun 24, 06 11:27 pm Reply with quote
Every so often,
Decline into slump.
Duecing yourself,
For every unsound frump.

Mooting ever tread,
For no understanding.
A turuous reconstruct,
Always demanding.

Although all affairs are unflawed,
Yet you cerebrate,
over the simplest fraud,
instead of sedate.

Beau ideal,
you concieve as abesent.
Instead,
You circumvent.

Why is nothing pluperfect,
Unwhelped,
Inside your intellect?

A moment without her,
You lament.
To the weak,
You relent.

Argue within yourself,
Whether it ought proceed.
Relationship unstable,
You mislead, accede.

Overthink the mere,
A second, solitary.
Mentation,
Vary.
 
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subject: posted: Aug 08, 06 9:00 am Reply with quote
cliched, and the rhthym is reminiscent of a jump-rope rhyme. no offense meant, of course...
 
  
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