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Amaya
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subject: BLACK posted: Apr 11, 05 7:26 pm Reply with quote
[b:0710c5d21d]Behold the concealment inside of me
Lonesomeness surrounds my soul
And all this suffering is only feeding the darkness
Convicted memories stuck in my own mind
Knowing no end will come...[/b:0710c5d21d]
 
Gary
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subject: posted: Apr 28, 05 11:47 pm Reply with quote
I really enjoyed this poem. Lot's of emotion.
 
Kira
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subject: posted: Apr 29, 05 12:43 pm Reply with quote
[color=darkblue:0ddfe67f47]i like this poem alot..i dunno what else to say except it s really good..i like it..alot. Cool [/color:0ddfe67f47]
 
  
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