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subject: Echo's of Joy posted: Apr 11, 05 7:22 pm Reply with quote
[color=darkblue:8a69a84ca1][b:8a69a84ca1]In my head a voice tells me to be happy but my heart asks why?
I remember hearing time's laughter as I ran and played.
Now I'm here at age 14 asking myself "Why?"
Now I see joy isn't lost but I now know I am.[/b:8a69a84ca1][/color:8a69a84ca1]


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Sorry it's not good,this is my very first poem
 
  
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