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PainIsHapiness
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subject: The End posted: Jun 01, 07 12:19 pm Reply with quote
Haze clouds the vision.
Pain and nothing more.
Living with this .
Madness over takes .
Pain is nothing more than happiness.
Right and wrong.
Life and Death.
All the same.
Where does this end?
When will the world return?



Umm.... What do you think? I like criticism ...

There will be more to come... the haze dictates when works come
 
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subject: posted: Jun 23, 07 2:50 pm Reply with quote
I like it, I really do
 
  
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