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subject: "pain in words" posted: Apr 28, 07 7:31 am Reply with quote

"you cant imagen the pain till you have felt it... but when you have felt it you cant imagen how life would feel without it.... let the sun shine from the sky warm you up.... let the rain run with your tears... and the tunder drown out your screams.... let the blood you drain form a picture perfect of pain... feel the fires of hell burn you till you shout out no more... death is wat is fueling my pian..... only without it i would never learn"

i recently buried a loved one and i read this out in front of every one at the funeral. it isnt a poem and it isnt a quotes, i dont really think it is some thing i can label.... but if i had to call it some thing i would call in "pain in words" the poem i have written below is short but meaningful.. thank-you x

my heart feels pain that is killing
my face is so stained with tears
i sit in the conner to hide from it
it being my worse ever fears

my eyes are so sore from the crying
my arms weak from hold you
my lips ache from kissing you lips
from telling you all that is true

my body is cold and so empty
my mind is full of despair
i stare and i search for you every day
expect you to form in thin air

but all that forms in a draft
blowing me back to your grave
remembering you while you were dying
remembering you were so brave

my heart may be broken and beaten
but my love for you will never end
im broken and torn in to peices
but i know you will fix me my friend.

in loving memory of C.S ... im sorry... Sad[i:669e062661][color=indigo:669e062661][/color:669e062661][/i:669e062661]
 
  
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