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subject: cruel joke posted: May 12, 06 2:50 am Reply with quote

this is my first poem. its about being cornered by depression/suicidal feelings.


I'm not laughing. When does it end; this cruel joke played on me?
Bound by absent burdens makes it difficult to breath.

A single ripple in a sea of futility.
Bleak, barren waters hide the warm welcome of relief.

A notion of discomfort, a notion so untimely deceased.
Collectively abolished by the voluntary weak.

Diluted words of wisdom, the faded covet to be free.
This world, entwined in self deceit; offers no release.
 
  
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