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Poetryjunkie
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subject: Confused Heart posted: Jan 01, 06 9:15 pm Reply with quote
I gave you my heart,
You took it with care,
I made you laugh everyday,
You saw me bare,

You liked my hair,
I liked your eyes,
You loved to kiss me,
I loved the element of suprize,

We became very close,
They started to stare,
We were both so happy,
They said to beware,

You slowed things down,
I could deal with that,
You called me less,
I just waited and sat,

I held your hand,
You took it away,
I was confused inside,
You wanted a delay,

You called one night,
I answered the phone,
You said lets be friends,
I agreed with a tone,

We walked away with smiles,
We made it a very happy day,
You felt our feelings were mutual,
But, why dont I feel that way.
 
TheKnowledgePoet
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subject: posted: Jan 25, 06 2:55 pm Reply with quote
That was very deep!

I liked the flow!

I'm out peace... Idea
 
darkfairy_1988
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subject: posted: Feb 18, 06 11:19 pm Reply with quote
What is with this..everyone is writing exactly how i feel right now..anyways very good..I really like it..
 
  
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