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Atrishers
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subject: Another chance posted: Jul 09, 05 1:10 pm Reply with quote

Finally we are back together again
But now all efforts are in vain
I wanna sit forever in the train
I wanna walk forever in the rain
I'm at loss and nothing gain
Our memories kept appearing in my brain
I wanna hit myself with a cane
Blood flowing out of my veins
All i felt was *ing pain
I try not to be insane
I try very hard to refrain
Myself from hiding from reality
But it is damn hard to maintain my morality

Please give me another chance
Please give me a second glance
Please accompany me through the song and dance
I don't mean to offense
I know it make no sense
But I don't wanna lose you as a friend
So please give me another chance
 
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subject: understand posted: Jul 10, 05 5:23 pm Reply with quote

i totally get what ur going through. its a great poem too!
 
  
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