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myINsidesCHURN
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subject: All about you! posted: Jul 06, 05 7:19 pm Reply with quote

You tought me to love
You tought me to feel
all i want to believe
is that this time it was for real...
all that mattered was the pain in your eyes..
and the hate it brought, along with the lies.....
i watched you suffer from thousand feet away
while they tortured your soul each and everyday
I loved the person deep within your soul
but u kept him locked away
u kept him under control
U let me see the danger once in little a while
u kept me safe as a little child..
the little girl is gone
and whats left is me now
i loved you for who you were
why cant you love me for me?[color=indigo:691fda0eb2][/color:691fda0eb2]
 
DiEtowantI
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subject: posted: Jul 11, 05 8:26 pm Reply with quote

clenched my throat was
as you told me you loved me
i couldn't breathe
to answer
your soul
death happened
and i am whats left
the one you see with me
stole my heart
chewing on the remains is difficult
isn't that what we always
are left with?
 
  
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