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Amaya
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posted: Apr 11, 05 7:35 pm  |
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OK,I should know if this is good because I don't know if I should turn it in for extra credit.Buck is a dog from a book called"Call of the Wild"
[color=darkred:30b9d2ff3a][b:30b9d2ff3a]B- Blood red primative eyes seeking prey
U- Unknowing
C- Calls of echoing howls in the deep,frozen,white forest
K- Killing the prey with blood dripping fangs[/b:30b9d2ff3a][/color:30b9d2ff3a]
Gotta work on it |
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Amaya
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posted: Apr 17, 05 5:42 pm |
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Or maybe this is better?
[b:1f7b534aeb]B- Blood red primative eyes seeking prey
U- Uncivilized manners running through the mind
C- Calls of echoing howls in the deep,frozen,white forest
K- Killing the prey with blood dripping fangs [/b:1f7b534aeb] |
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Gary
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posted: Apr 18, 05 12:36 pm |
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| Personally I like the first one better. Seems more mysterious. |
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Amaya
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posted: Apr 19, 05 2:46 pm |
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| Thanks^.^ Well I am working on another poem for the same story but it's not going out so well I think..I can't remeber the type of indians were in it at the end.... |
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