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sweetguy32210
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subject: broken down to bits posted: May 11, 05 7:31 pm Reply with quote
Living lies livin faith living the same *in road over and over again am tried and really dont care anymore so forget it.I will say bye and you say why every time never fails so * it I long for the answer of my life.And never get it I wont forget the PAIN!You put me though I wont forget the lies the mistrust the hate That you put into me i wont for it.

What for anymore why take the pain that takes my soul?

[edit]No [b:cdb7dad72b]cursing[/b:cdb7dad72b] please edited by [b:cdb7dad72b]Gary[/b:cdb7dad72b][/edit]
 
Besi
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subject: posted: May 13, 05 8:24 am Reply with quote
i really like the way you've set out this one...going against the whole conventional thing when it comes to poetry...pretty powerful writing i think!
 
  
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